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Lucifer by =hidaka:iconhidaka:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Narrative > Spoken Word


How to be a saint if you feel like a sinner?
What is sacred if you know nothing but judgment?
How can you say heaven if you don't know what hell is?
What is the importance of life if you don't fear death?
How light would help you survive if darkness dwells within yourself?
How would you know mercy if you don't have faith?
What a simple act can do if you're living in chains?
How would you call for help if no one hears you scream?

What would you think...? Whom would you think...?

No repay and no reborn... what else makes me a sinner? With my truthful youth of what may it seemed unfair, with the anguish pain inside of what we call heart, with my wild hunger for an unintentional revenge... would I be able to climb up again? How would I tell you how sad I am if you covered up your ear for my crying voice? Now I can tell... how much these sacrifices means to me. I felt betrayed my Father... can you hear me now?

I thank You for giving light,
And by that I was born.
Wise and full of intellect,
I'm Your very first creation.

I had obeyed everything You said,
But I never gained love from You.
All I have is my undying faith,
Until I saw the meaning of truth.

I lied because of what I believe,
That everything is for our own good.
But now I've been deceived,
And that's how I became a fool.

I've been calling out Your name,
Hoping You would hear me scream.
But when Your shadow started to fade,
I realized how indifferent You are on my pains.

Heaven is now perfect and beautiful,
A place where I am no longer welcome.
All You need is the complete opposite,
So I loved You for what You have done.
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TITLE: Lucifer

How much do we know anything about the fallen angel Lucifer Morningstar? Only a few people knows how sad his story had become and that how much pain he carried all through these years. Only a few people can understand him and only a few could accept him from who he was.. on what he had become. But whatever false information and knowledge, or thought and facts that people knows and judge him, you cannot just simply say how "evil" he is... because many of us might haven't seen the other side of him.

Geez.. what am I saying? XD
Well, I just want to write what I know about him.. I mean, how I see him. That's all.. ^^; He's been misunderstood by the many... and judged as an evil. ^^

No matter how evil Lucifer has been as what they say, there is still that "good" in him. He is an angel who knows pain than God because he knows our pain. He's been an angel once, and he will be again in time... when that time comes, everyone will know.

a fallen angel and his sad story.


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:o TAMA NA HIDAKA, BAKA UMIYAK KA NA DYAN... :o

Hidaka: ONE OF MY BELOVED ANGEL! TT_TT Huwaaa~
Oraphel: Geezz.. get a hold on yourself! And get this flu mask off my eyes! :pissed:
Hidaka: It's okay Oraphel.. that flu mask is clean.. I'll buy you some Phantom of the Opera when I get my allowance back. I promise you that.... T_T
Oraphel: After being mean to me on your deviation featuring myself, how am I suppose to believe you now?
Hidaka: Huwaaahh~! HIDOI DESHOU! ANATA WA HIDOI DESHOU! :cries:
Oraphel: AHOU! XD

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~hyperme Feb 23, 2008, 4:41:12 PM
kewl! but who was lucifer again? ^^; looked up on wikipedia but it had too much details for me to understand :(

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~i-eLa-me Feb 23, 2008, 6:12:18 PM
wow. :3

pinatamaan ba ako XD

nice one tatay. :3

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=hidaka Feb 23, 2008, 7:55:47 PM
who is Lucifer? Oh yeah... you shouldn't just focus on the information on wiki ^^. you should also read the history of the fallen angel on some articles. by reading some, you'll understand his pain. :D

lalalala~
t'c! :thumbsup:

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=hidaka Feb 23, 2008, 7:57:08 PM
tinamaan ka ba? aheheheh... :rofl:
salamat. ^^ hay, ewan ko ba, pakiramdam ko ako yan. XD
nararamdaman ko lang siguro yung nararamdaman nya noon.

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~mariaclaradesu Feb 23, 2008, 8:20:26 PM
hIDAKA!
It's good!

Where's the inspiration coming from? :D

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=hidaka Feb 23, 2008, 8:28:09 PM
er... I do not know either. ^^;
pinagpapalagay ko lang na ako si Lucifer, kaya ako nakakapag-isip ng ganyan. eheheh, salamat! hm.. pero san nga ba? Ah! Dahil sa story ko na Dei no Mori. isa kasi sa mga characters dun si Lucifer. :D

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~hyperme Feb 23, 2008, 8:55:24 PM
thankies for teh infos :)
awwww that's sad so much misunderstandings :(

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~i-eLa-me Feb 23, 2008, 8:58:45 PM
mejo mejo? hehe di joke lan. XD

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=hidaka Feb 23, 2008, 8:59:19 PM
eheheh.. yeah ^^

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=hidaka Feb 23, 2008, 9:00:03 PM
mejo mejo heheh :rofl:

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